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Post by Audio Pineapple on Jun 3, 2007 17:23:31 GMT 1
Nope; he's still coming back in three days time, the rest of them just don't know it.
So what did you think about Caroline, Paul and Bill? (couldn't resist giving them a cameo lol)
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Post by Dingley on Jun 3, 2007 18:06:53 GMT 1
oh they were cool, good to see Kellerman will be the boss of Kim! Was wondering who it was talking at 1st but liked the way you brought them in like that.
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Post by Audio Pineapple on Jun 3, 2007 18:13:36 GMT 1
 I was hoping that it wasn't obvious right off the bat. |
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Post by Audio Pineapple on Jun 14, 2007 19:16:23 GMT 1
This will be updated - honest. I've written a big chunk of the next chapter but it's in my notebook and I've lost it  |
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Post by Dingley on Jun 22, 2007 8:54:08 GMT 1
lol, you not doing this Sundays and Wednesdays then? Just kidding, just typing in here so you remember it!   |
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Post by Audio Pineapple on Jun 23, 2007 0:42:29 GMT 1
the missing notebook has been driving me scatty! It's not just this fic that was in it but other one's as well - along with ideas for the forum games! But I can't find it anywhere!
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Post by Audio Pineapple on Jul 21, 2007 23:15:03 GMT 1
 Chapter 20“I’m scared.”
Michael looked up at the bottom of the top bunk; surprised that Greg was talking to him after spending the past four hours in silence. “Why?”
“Teddy’s dead.”
A couple of days earlier and he felt as though he would have burst out laughing at the pet-name but it just made him realise once again that Sucre wasn’t with him anymore and, unlike T-Bag he didn’t have the luxury of returning. “You call him Teddy?”
“Not officially, then I call him… called him Mr Bagwell. He got angry if I didn’t.”
“Charming. I can see why he deserved to survive the riot,” he had muttered it under his breath, still lost in his own thoughts and found himself confused by Greg’s response.
“Don’t you think that was a bit evil?”
“What?”
“He didn’t survive the riot.”
“Oh, yeah.”
“Yeah! Now I’m sorry that you lost your Sugar person but how about having some respect?”
Michael laughed, feeling the anger beginning to boil, grateful to be feeling something other than failure and sorrow. “Respect? For that?”
He saw Greg’s legs dangle from the edge of the bed before the younger man jumped down, his cheeks flushed red, “don’t talk about him like that! You didn’t know him!”
“He’s a monster and I think I know him well enough!” Part of him felt as though he could stop, roll over and pretend to sleep and hide away again but the anger flooded him with adrenaline and he stood toe to toe with Greg. “Why not ask Seth? Why not ask him how Teddy was so nice and sweet to him that he killed himself? Why not ask John Abruzzi about how lovable Teddy was slitting his throat open just to further his own skin? Why not ask the kids he raped? The kids he murdered? The corpses he fucked? Or was it always your lifelong dream to become a sex slave for old, racist perverts like T-Bag and Anderson?”
He didn’t have time to think about catching his footing as Greg flew at him, smashing him onto the floor of the cell. He struggled to get up, finding himself pnned down “get off me!”
“Take back what you said!”
He hissed in pain as Greg’s fingernails scraped across his cheek and drew back his knees, slamming them into Greg’s stomach and shimmying out of grasp before standing up again. “Wait!” he struggled for breath as Greg stood up, his fists clenched. “Truce?”
Greg shot a dirty look at him before climbing back into his bunk and Michael slid onto his own, eager to hide himself from another attack.
“He could be nice you know, he had this weird way of making you feel safe.”
Michael thought back to being with him after the riot; how his skin had been crawling with tales of children and masturbation but how they’d kept him calm, made him forget what had just happened for a moment. “I suppose so.”
“And Sammy’s lovely; you see how he stood up to Rackham? He’s like my knight in shining armour in here.”
“Poor kid.”
“Why? I can’t have a knight?”
“I suppose; you’re both murderers anyway.”
“Sammy is a rapist, not a murderer.”
“Oh.”
“And my teacher deserved it.”
“Hmm,” he didn’t mean it as a question. Saying it more because he didn’t know what to say but Greg responded regardless.
“He promised me he’d give me an A if I slept with him; so I did. But he promised the same to a bunch of other kids as well. At the end of term he said that if he gave them all A’s he would look suspicious so I ended up with a B plus.
“So you killed him?”
“Yeah.”
“How the hell are you not on death row?”
“I was drunk as hell, plus my defence said it was a crime of passion.”
“Can you keep a secret?”
“You’re really gay and you want some sex?”
Michael found himself choking on his own spittle, “no!”
“Damn, you’re sexy you know? I really think it has something to do with those eyes…”
“T-Bag’s alive.”
“That’s not funny.”
“It’s not a joke; he’s coming back the day after tomorrow. Pope and Sara both said.”
He almost jumped when Greg’s head popped down over the top of the bed, a huge grin on his face, “no kidding?”
“No kidding.” |
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Post by scofield72 on Jul 22, 2007 20:19:02 GMT 1
Brilliant, as usual!!!!
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Post by Dingley on Jul 23, 2007 12:09:41 GMT 1
Wow, great work as always. But I can't remember why does the guy thin T-Bag is dead? I thought they knew he was alive last time- or was that just an argument they had? Glad to see this back anyway and looking forward to more chapters!
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Post by Audio Pineapple on Jul 23, 2007 18:16:04 GMT 1
lol - Rackham told everyone that he was dead so that he could take over
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Post by Cute Poison on Jul 23, 2007 19:40:12 GMT 1
Oh read all of this for the first time today!
Tis very good AP!
Next one soon?
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Post by Audio Pineapple on Jul 23, 2007 21:23:35 GMT 1
woah - all of it!? Thanks!
And hopfully lol
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Post by rebeccag on Jul 24, 2007 0:02:09 GMT 1
*thumbs* thats great AP i need to read the bits ive missed tjough I havent read it in ages
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Post by Cute Poison on Jul 24, 2007 0:10:42 GMT 1
Yeh i read it all today!
I can't just read a bit then stop if theres more and i'm enjoying it!
;D
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Post by Audio Pineapple on Jul 24, 2007 0:32:28 GMT 1
thanks Rebecca!
and cool lol CP!
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